Listen, no one is more shocked by where this one goes than me.
It starts innocently enough with a simple act of rejection and then culminates with maybe the most violent act that’s come out of my imagination.
Truly, I don’t know what this one is about but maybe that’s a good thing? Gun to my head, I think it’s a story about the dangers of putting your faith in catchall cures? Or like the dangers of trying to “fix” how you’re seen by others? I don’t know.
Here’s what I want to know before I move on to draft 2:
What the fuck is this one about?
Do the choices I’ve made work? Honestly, I am so lost and surprised by what came out that I’m open to all suggestions.
Do I need to watch Neon Demon?
Shoutout to Limitless,
Dream Casting
AJ: Florence Pugh, Kaitlyn Dever, Maya Hawke, Ansel Elgort,
Left/Right Eye: Jennifer Coolidge, Toni Collette, Parker Posey, Susan Sarandon
Bouncer: John Cena, Chris Hemsworth,
